• もしあれば、画面に表示されたエラーメッセージをコピー&ペーストしてください

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• 何をしたいか、何をしたか、何が起きたかを説明してください

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• あなたの言語の代わりに、表示されている英語の文章をコピー&ペーストしてください。 このバグのスクリーンショットをお持ちの場合は、お好みの画像ホスティングサービス(例えば、 snipboard.io　など）をご利用し、コピー&ペーストしたリンクをここに書き込んでください。 このテキストは翻訳ページで翻訳可能になっていますか?もしそうならば、24時間以上前に翻訳されていますか?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• 何を意味するのか、簡単に理解できるようにあなたの提案を正確かつ簡潔に説明してください。

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• ブロックされたときの表示は何でしたか(空のスクリーン?一部のみのゲームインターフェイス?エラーメッセージ?)

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• BGAで正しく実装されていないルールはどの部分ですか?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• ルールの間違いはゲームのリプレイで確認できますか?そうであれば、行動番号は何番ですか?

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• やりたかったゲームアクションは何ですか?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• このゲームアクションを引き起こす為に何を試みましたか?

• これを行おうとしたときに何が起こりましたか?(エラーメッセージ、ステータスバーメッセージ、他)

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• どの段階でこの問題が起こりましたか?(画面の指示はどうなっていましたか)

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• ゲームアクションを行おうとしたとき、何が起こりましたか?(エラーメッセージ、ステータスバーメッセージ、他)

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• 表示の問題を説明してください このバグのスクリーンショットをお持ちの場合は、お好みの画像ホスティングサービス(例えば、 snipboard.io　など）をご利用し、コピー&ペーストしたリンクをここに書き込んでください。

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• あなたの言語の代わりに、表示されている英語の文章をコピー&ペーストしてください。 このバグのスクリーンショットをお持ちの場合は、お好みの画像ホスティングサービス(例えば、 snipboard.io　など）をご利用し、コピー&ペーストしたリンクをここに書き込んでください。 このテキストは翻訳ページで翻訳可能になっていますか?もしそうならば、24時間以上前に翻訳されていますか?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?

• 何を意味するのか、簡単に理解できるようにあなたの提案を正確かつ簡潔に説明してください。

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• あなたのブラウザは何ですか?